November 26, 2015

NIGHT NOISES

This week we read this piece of writing by Joy Watson. We talked about the verbs the author used to make the writing descriptive. We then wrote about the noises that are made while we're asleep. We tried to use descriptive verbs.
We published our writing on the ipads.

Night Noises

In the night
Cats fight...
Spitting, scratching, hissing, howling
Chasing, racing, hunting, prowling...
Every night.

In the dark
Dogs bark...
One will start, the rest reply,
Shouting dog news to the sky...
When it's dark.

While we sleep
Hedgehogs creep...
Snuffling, snorting as they pass,
Making pathways through the grass...
While we're asleep.










3 comments:

  1. Brilliant! What clever pieces of writing.

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  2. I really enjoyed reading your writing. Great stuff room 2
    Sharelle Clark

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  3. what awesome writing room 2! AJ I am so proud of how far your writing has come this year x I love reading all these great authors

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