This week we have talked and written about Autumn
Autumn
Leaves
tumbling from the trees
Red,
gold, orange, yellow, brown.
Bare
trees
Crunching
under my feet.
Zara
Autumn
The
leaves are falling off trees
Red,
orange, yellow, gold and brown.
They
are tumbling down onto the ground
Making
piles for children to play in.
Bare
trees have no leaves.
Breeze
Autumn
Long
nights, shorter days
Leaves
changing colour
Yellow,
red, orange, gold, brown.
Tumbling
leaves
Spinning
to the ground
Autumn
I
like the leaves falling because I can jump in them.
Orange,
yellow and gold leaves crumbling under my feet,
Making
a mat on the grass.
Angela
Autumn
The
trees are losing their leaves
Leaves
are falling
They
are changing colour
Yellow,
crimson, gold, red, orange.
We
jump in them,
People
have to rake them up.
Autumn
The
leaves are falling off the trees
The
leaves are red, orange, yellow and brown.
I
jump in the leaves.
It
gets cold. People start to wear scarves and beanies.
Jahrell
Autumn
Leaves falling down
Red, orange, yellow and brown.
The leaves make a carpet.
Children jump in the leaves,
The leaves are crunching under my feet.
Kaitlin
Autumn
Autumn
Leaves falling down
Red, orange, yellow and brown.
The leaves make a carpet.
Children jump in the leaves,
The leaves are crunching under my feet.
Kaitlin
Autumn
The leaves are falling off the trees
Red and orange
Spinning to the ground.
Vaughan
Red and orange
Spinning to the ground.
Vaughan
Great descriptive writing. Well Done Room 2!
ReplyDeleteSharelle Clark
Kia ora Room 2 students. I loved reading your autumn poems. It is a great season for poetry. I like your descriptive words like crunching, spinning and crumbling. from Mrs Lindsay.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful stories about Autumn. You have all captured just what Autumn is about.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely poem AJ. I like how you finished with something to play with. Love mum
ReplyDeleteHello Room 2. I loved reading your poems about autumn. It is a great season for writing poetry. I especially liked your descriptive words like spinning, crunching and crumbling.
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