May 14, 2015

Autumn

         This week we have talked and written about Autumn


           Autumn
Leaves tumbling from the trees
Red, gold, orange, yellow, brown.
Bare trees 
Piles of leaves to jump in                                 
Crunching under my feet.
                  Zara

                 Autumn
The leaves are falling off trees
Red, orange, yellow, gold and brown.
They are tumbling down onto the ground
Making piles for children to play in.
Bare trees have no leaves.
                          Breeze




    Autumn
Long nights, shorter days
Leaves changing colour
Yellow, red, orange, gold, brown.
Tumbling leaves
Spinning to the ground
Leaves making piles for the children to play in.        


                     AJ

    




                    Autumn
I like the leaves falling because I can jump in them.
Orange, yellow and gold leaves crumbling under my feet,
Making a mat on the grass.
           Angela

                            Autumn
The trees are losing their leaves
Leaves are falling
They are changing colour
Yellow, crimson, gold, red, orange.
We jump in them,
People have to rake them up.
                         Franky                                                         

      Autumn
The leaves are falling off the trees
The leaves are red, orange, yellow and brown.
I jump in the leaves.
It gets cold. People start to wear scarves and beanies.



              Jahrell

     Autumn
Leaves falling down
Red, orange, yellow and brown.
The leaves make a carpet.
Children  jump in the leaves,
The leaves are crunching under my feet.
                         Kaitlin
                  
                              Autumn
The leaves are falling off the trees
Red and orange
Spinning to the ground.
             Vaughan

5 comments:

  1. Great descriptive writing. Well Done Room 2!
    Sharelle Clark

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  2. Kia ora Room 2 students. I loved reading your autumn poems. It is a great season for poetry. I like your descriptive words like crunching, spinning and crumbling. from Mrs Lindsay.

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  3. Beautiful stories about Autumn. You have all captured just what Autumn is about.

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  4. What a lovely poem AJ. I like how you finished with something to play with. Love mum

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  5. Hello Room 2. I loved reading your poems about autumn. It is a great season for writing poetry. I especially liked your descriptive words like spinning, crunching and crumbling.

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